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35
forget about the future
enjoy cherry blossoms
now in full bloom
d.h
36)
dance around the old tree
in a warm spring weekend
m
This is the end of "eternal freedon." Thank you!
| | 2010/08/18 1:57 PM |
34)
night and day prayer went on
until the next war broke out
m
35)
forget about the future
enjoy cherry blossoms
now in full bloom
d.h
| d.horse | 2010/08/18 12:14 PM |
33
a farewell to arms
may peace prevail
all over the world
d.h
34)
night and day prayer went on
until the next war broke out
m
| mandala | 2010/08/18 11:42 AM |
32)
mosque or Taoist temple
yes either will do
m
33)
A Farewell to Arms
May peace prevail
all over the world
d.h
| d.horse | 2010/08/18 9:00 AM |
yes, of course. take your time.
| mandala | 2010/08/17 9:01 PM |
Thank you, Dr.M for the very good and spicy modification for No.31.
Let me have a little more time for No.33
d.h
| d.horse | 2010/08/17 3:02 PM |
31
the dollar’s fall
Fifth Avenue is in color
of Asians
d.h
32)
mosque or Taoist temple
yes either will do
m
| | 2010/08/17 12:05 PM |
31)
the dollar weakened
5th Avenue in autumn
is in the color of Asians
d.h
| d.horse | 2010/08/17 9:05 AM |
29)
a big bite of
double decker burgers
in good spirits
m
30)
No cutting in the line
Shanghai Expo's opening
d.h
| d.horse | 2010/08/16 10:49 AM |
28
only if no dawns
break in agony
d.h
29)
a big bite of
double decker burgers
in good spirits
| mandala | 2010/08/15 8:55 PM |
27)
there’s no solace
like bar hopping
a long evening
m
28)
only if no dawns
break in agony
d.h
| d.horse | 2010/08/15 3:16 PM |
26
what a marvel of nature
seventeen-year locust
d.h
27)
there’s no bliss
like bar hopping
a long evening
m
| mandala | 2010/08/15 11:39 AM |
25)
hey Plato
we’ve got the moon above
symposium now
m
26)
what a marvel of nature
seventeen-year locust
d.h
| d.horse | 2010/08/15 10:25 AM |
24
clean up the mess on your desk
make room for champagne flutes
d.h
25)
hey Plato
we’ve got the moon above
symposium now
m
| mandala | 2010/08/14 9:21 PM |
23)
Pandora
allures him to open
the nuclear briefcase
m
24)
clean up the mess on your desk
make room for champagne flutes
d.h
| d.horse | 2010/08/14 5:36 PM |
22
I leave the key here
please take good care of yourself
dh
23)
Pandora
allures him to open
the nuclear briefcase
m
| mandala | 2010/08/13 11:55 PM |
21)
take all the money
and set me free
my deareast
m
22)
I leave the key here
please take good care of yourself
dh
| d.horse | 2010/08/13 4:55 PM |
20
be vigilant
bandits frequent roads
d.h
21)
take all the money
and set me free
my deareast
| mandala | 2010/08/13 1:20 AM |
19)
snow starts melting
caravan bells again
in the Hindu Kush
m
20)
Be vigilant
bandits frequented
d.h
| d.horse | 2010/08/07 11:47 AM |
17
dear politicians,
party is over
no cherry blossom viewing
d.h
18)
in his spring message
Osama tells us
m
19)
snow starts melting
caravan bells again
in the Hindu Kush
m
| mandala | 2010/08/06 5:48 PM |
16)
a Chinese nuclear sub
surfaced at the north pole
m
17)
Dear politicians,
party is over
no cherry blossom viewing
d.h
| d.horse | 2010/08/06 4:34 PM |
15
bears caught salmon enough
minks stored nuts enough
but winter¥'s coming late
d.h
16)
a Chinese nuclear sub
surfaced at the north pole
m
| mandala | 2010/08/05 4:53 PM |
14)
in advance download
Das Kapital to the iPad
m
15)
bears caught salmon enough
minks stored nuts enough
but winter's coming late
d.h
| d.horse | 2010/08/05 11:06 AM |
13
I'll be in the cocktail lounge
reading a bestseller
join me there at ten
d.h
14)
in advance download
Das Kapital to the iPad
m
| mandala | 2010/08/04 7:36 PM |
12)
they scream at a huge smoke
rising over Manhattan
m
13)
I'll be in the cocktail lounge
reading a bestseller
join me there at ten
d.h
| d.horse | 2010/08/04 1:30 PM |
11
peace was broken
by a strong jolt
the volcano's erupting
dh
12)
they scream at a huge smoke
rising over Manhattan
m
| mandala | 2010/08/03 2:04 PM |
10
after a dazzling sunset
calm and free evening came
m
11
peace was broken
by a strong jolt
the volcano's erupting
dh
| d.horse | 2010/08/03 10:27 AM |
8
dangling in mid-air
off the Eiger North Wall
9)
bottle gourds swing
in the garden of
a widow
Snowman
10
after a dazzling sunset
calm and free evening came
m
| mandala | 2010/08/02 6:19 PM |
The No.8 verse gave d.horse a clear picture of the most known song "Musumesan Yokukikeyo, Yamaotokoni Horerunayo...", so he translated the lylics in a parody of the song by modifying a little bit to "marry a climber" insted of fall in love with him. Was it wrong?
mmm...,
You are right, that was a simple translation of the song and not exactly constituting a "parody".
I would take your first modification for its substitute. (but not in the name of d.h., pleae)
sorry for the trouble.
d.horse
| d.horse | 2010/08/02 4:08 PM |
‘Never marry a mountain climber’ will infringe the copyright.
Allow me to add modifications:
the climber’s widow
has since hated to see
bottle gourds swing
or
Have you ever seen
that strange fruit
Billie sang to us
or
any new idea?
| | 2010/08/02 2:13 PM |
for No.9
Listen, young lady
Never marry a mountain climber
who might widow you soon
dh
| d.horse | 2010/08/02 8:21 AM |
8)
dangling in mid-air
off the Eiger North Wall
| mandala | 2010/08/01 5:33 PM |
for No.7
wind in the south
moon pale in the east
typhoon on its way in the west
(d.h.)
| d.horse | 2010/08/01 1:17 PM |
4
how about a scary movie
with a bucket of popcorn?
(d.horse)
5)
watch out! don’t step
into the dark side
of your ego
mandala
6)
let there be light the book said
so they built a lighthouse
mandala
| mandala | 2010/07/31 4:34 PM |
for No.4
how about a scary movie
with a bucket of popcorn?
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2010/07/31 7:53 AM |
2
while ordinary men
run after money
D.Horse
3)
burned out
in the asphalt jungle
a heat wave
Mandala
| mandala | 2010/07/28 9:22 PM |
for No.2
while ordinary men
run after money
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2010/07/28 7:57 AM |