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| mandala | 2008/06/18 9:49 AM |
Listen, they started removing
snow of the alpine highway
(d.horse)
pale pink petals
drifting around
all day long
(tina)
36
footprints of Princess Saho
everywhere on the meadow
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| anne | 2008/06/17 11:21 PM |
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| mandala | 2008/06/16 12:14 AM |
That (¢) was me, tina, sorry!!
| tina | 2008/06/13 6:06 PM |
to right to left
waters split in two
making high walls
(mandala)
Listen, they started removing
snow of the alpine highway
(d.horse)
for #35
pale pink petals
drifting around
all day long
cherries and apples
of the gourd-shaped hamlet
in full bloom
dancing and singing
flowery-dressed girls
under the tree
taratantara
scattering
the blossoms
(tina)
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| | 2008/06/13 12:16 PM |
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ocean splits in half
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| mandala | 2008/05/25 3:13 PM |
#33
to right to left
¡¡waters split in two
¡¡making high walls
(mandala)
for #34
no single tree nor grass
Mt. Sinai stood in haze
(d.horse)
calm as the Red Sea
warm air in the olive grove
(d.horse)
Listen, they started removing
snow of the alpine highway
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2008/05/25 12:24 PM |
#32)
¡¡the toy brick house
¡¡suddenly broken down
¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡(tina)
ÉÕ
#33)
¡¡c¡Çmon Gulliver
¡¡stop snoring a while
¡¡will you?
¡¡(mandala)
¡¡gods enjoy
¡¡domino-toppling
¡¡with communists
¡¡to right to left
¡¡waters splits in two
¡¡making high walls
| mandala | 2008/05/24 10:23 PM |
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33) mandala
34) d.horse
35) tina
36) anne
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| mandala | 2008/05/24 9:54 PM |
#31
a basketful of mushroom
delivered
from secret mountain
(anne)
for #32
my grandpa's horse
started to guffaw
the toy brick house
suddenly broken down
my granduncle lives
six doors away
since a baby contest
will be held on Friday
(tina)
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| tina | 2008/05/23 11:20 AM |
29)
a train whistle far off
a dog howling near by
moonlit silence of a night
(d.horse)
30)
a hut midst the pampas
alone in autumn wind
(mandala)
for
31)ÉÕ¤±
gristle of salmon
tossed in salad
in sweet vinegar and spice
a basketful of mushroom
delivered
from secret mountain
do best for details
to make chrysanthemum dolls
of heroes
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| anne | 2008/05/10 2:45 PM |
29)
a train whistle far off
a dog howling near by
moonlit silence of a night
(d.horse)
ÉÕ
30)
some awake some asleep
a flophouse in autumn
(mandala)
who is that singing
a september song?
a hut midst the pampas
alone in autumn wind
| mandala | 2008/04/29 11:23 AM |
#27
a bandoneon
touches again
the slow writer
(tina)
#28
Templo de la Sagrada Famillia,
a Japanese mason's there
(anne)
for #29
I haven't seen my folks many years
Are they looking
at the same moon as I am?
(Abenonakamaro/d.horse)
a train whistle far off
a dog howling near by
moonlit silence of a night
(d.horse)
in the eastern sky
a flight of migrating geese
the moon about to rise
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2008/04/27 6:28 PM |
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29) d.horse
30) mandala
31) anne
32) tina
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| mandala | 2008/04/26 5:24 PM |
#26
time heals a broken heart?
but it stood still
(d.horse)
#27
a bandoneon
touches again
the slow writer
(tina)
for#28
Templo de la Sagrada Famillia,
a Japanese mason's there
"Back Soon" a note
left on the doormat
fully dressed in red
with a rose in her mouth
drama opened
with a sobbing overeture
¤è¤í¤·¤¯
anne
| anne | 2008/04/25 1:15 AM |
#25
flesh and blood
after the holy dinner
a tipsy lurch
(mandala)
#26
time heals a broken heart?
but it stood still
(d.horse)
for #27
his hometown
completely covered with
ochre sands
a bandoneon
touches again
the slow writer
chicken or egg ---
he scratches his head
yet again
she stares at
the glassy Grebe Lake
almost in tears
(above written by slow writer tina)¡¡
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| tina | 2008/04/21 12:37 AM |
#24
something heavy-looking
dropped in the lotus pond
(tina)
#25
flesh and blood
after the holy dinner
a tipsy lurch
(mandala)
for #26
Only the fool rush in?
I don't care
(d.horse)
I took a train to
a sentimental journey
(d.horse)
time heals a broken heart?
but it stood still
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2008/04/12 10:25 AM |
I failed to notice that someone had already enjoyed a blissful nap. So, let me change ¡Ædoze¡Çto¡Ætrance.¡Ç
(old)
on a bridge
he falls into a doze
fading light
(new)
on a bridge
he falls into a trance
fading light
| mandala | 2008/04/11 12:34 AM |
#24
something heavy-looking
dropped in the lotus pond
(tina)
ÉÕ#25
losing control
mayday mayday
we¡Çve been hit
(mandala)
flesh and blood
after the holy dinner
a tipsy lurch
on a bridge
he falls into a doze
fading light
| mandala | 2008/04/10 11:31 PM |
¼¡¤Ï
25) mandala
26) d.horse
27) tina
28) anne
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| mandala | 2008/04/10 7:40 PM |
#23
through a hole to the sky
lamentation rose up
like clouds
(anne)
for #24
a few drops of rain
wet her thin shoulders
he decided to turn back
halfway across the swing bridge
something heavy-looking
dropped in the lotus pond
a bunch of sunflowers mislaid
on the van Gogh's chair
(tina)
Yoroshiku!
Now I'll be back to watch a hiru-melo on TV.
Have a good day.
| tina | 2008/04/10 3:50 PM |
22)
who shout for freedom
from jails in Tibet?
(mandala)
23)
ÉÕ
smiling calmly he walks
with toga
on his shoulder (anne)
breakfast! 24 hours!
so many signs
alongside the junction
through a hole to the sky
lamentation rose up
like clouds
¤è¤í¤·¤¯
¡¡¡¡anne
| | 2008/04/07 12:25 AM |
21)
no places to visit
no friends to call
a blissful afternoon nap
(d.horse)
ÉÕ¡¡No.22
who shout for freedom
from jails in Tibet?
(mandala)
on a desert island
in the South Pacific
until enlightened
please remain seated
| mandala | 2008/03/30 10:17 PM |
No.19
shampooed and permed
wife is ready to go out
(anne)
for No.20
no places to visit
no friends to call
a blissful afternoon nap
(d.horse)
I think I saw a troupe
of nice-looking guys
barnstorming Kabuki?
(d.horse)
an empty glass of whiskey
a baseball game on T.V.
a sleeping dog, unattended
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2008/03/30 4:06 PM |
Mandala has just come back from a tour.
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21) d. horse
22) mandala
23) anne
24) tina
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| mandala | 2008/03/29 8:49 PM |
#17 spring( the cherry blossoms)
#18 spring( after Tu Fu )
So,I'd like to choose Tina-san's farm tractor because of its indication of cultivating at spring time, although I know this kasen is not moving regularly on purpose.
roaring
a farm tractor
approaching tina
tuke
scones cut horizontally
served with cream and jam anne
shampooed and permed
wife is ready to go out
on a board drawn
a hieroglyph of falsehood
gorgeous name is
the morning blue dragon
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| anne | 2008/03/24 12:40 PM |
Dear Mr. Chairman
and Tina-san
I must confess and apologize that the verse posted as #18 was a copy of the great Chinese poet, Tu Fu and not of my own idea.
Please correct to (Tu Fu on the d.horse) as the original composer's name.
Very sorry, d.horse
| d.horse | 2008/03/15 5:36 PM |
#18(Orihasi)
war-battered hometown, alack
ruined castle in deep weeds
(d.horse)
for #19 (Nagori/Omote #1)
the Finance Minister
suddenly complains
of the colic
sorry, sir
toad oil's been
sold out
the brave soldier
bore with burning moxa
on his leg
roaring
a farm tractor
approaching
(tina)
Sorry for myàkameáresponse again.
| tina | 2008/03/14 10:54 PM |
17)
hawks and doves
all forget to fight
the cherry blossoms
(mandala)
for #18
war-battered hometown, alack
ruined castle in deep weeds
(d.horse)
empty your glasses, soldiers
you were noble in retreat
(d.horse)
in sporadic clapping of hands
an old businessman left his office
(d.horse)
a branch of willow in his hand
a young man sneaked away westward
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2008/03/07 11:20 AM |
16)
unexpectedly huge bird
reflected in the mirror
17)
on wings of song
to the blooming bank of
the Potomac
(mandala)
hawks and doves
all forget to fight
the cherry blossoms
petals circle down
to the green velvet of
the shamrock
me divorced and down
kids ran away from town
petals circle down
D.horse-san, Mandala will be staying at Kyoto until this weekend. Take your time.
| mandala | 2008/03/03 2:42 PM |
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17. mandala
18. d.horse
19. tina
20. anne
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| mandala | 2008/03/03 1:17 PM |
#15
seven-branch-sword
given by damsel
as a token of love
(anne)
for#16
unexpectedly huge bird
reflected in the mirror
predawn stillness
a coffin moved
oh poor little cuckoo
coughing up blood
to be or not to be
never settled down
¤è¤í¤·¤¯
| tina | 2008/03/02 11:56 PM |
¢
"damasel" is misspelled.
The correct word is damsel, thank you.
| anne | 2008/02/27 10:38 PM |
13
¡¡red and yellow leaves
¡¡underneath were people
¡¡carrying all black backpacks
¡¡(d.horse)
14¡¡
¡¡here comes a wild boar
¡¡straight down a single path
(mandala)
for #15
seven-branch-sword
given by damasel
as a token of love
into the cauldron thrown
everything effective
for lovesickness
credit cards and debit cards
swelling up the
crocodile wallet
¤è¤í¤·¤¯anne
| anne | 2008/02/27 10:30 PM |
13
¡¡red and yellow leaves
¡¡underneath were people
¡¡carrying all black backpacks
¡¡(d.horse)
ÉÕ¤±
#14)
¡¡he clubs a youngster
¡¡on the chill ground
¡¡(mandala)
¡¡no way out of
¡¡a fogged labyrinth
¡¡here comes a wild boar
¡¡straight down a single path
| mandala | 2008/02/22 1:02 PM |
how sweet a pomegranate is!
your parted lips behind your veil
are like a pomegranate cut open
(Bible)
| mandala | 2008/02/21 3:04 PM |
#11
for the Pluto
the last space shuttle's
already taken off
(tina)
#12
pomegranate sweet
in the moonlight
(anne)
for #13
azan from a far temple
a boy on a donkey
whipping sheep home
(d.horse)
dingdong of a hillside temple
kids dissipate
for the smell of rice boiling
(d.horse)
red and yellow leaves
underneath were people
carrying all black backpacks
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2008/02/20 3:21 PM |
emergency, Houston
Santa Claus's passing
ha-ha! ask him
to bring a flying pig
for my kid
The true story on December 25, 1968:
¡¡Apollo 8: Houston, Apollo 8. Over.
¡¡Mission Control: Hello, Apollo 8. Loud and ¡¡¡¡clear.
¡¡Apollo 8: Please be informed there is a ¡¡¡¡¡¡Santa Claus.
¡¡Mission Control: That's affirmative. You're ¡¡the best ones to know.
¼¡¤«¤é¤Ï¡¢
13. d.horse
14. mandala
15.anne
16.tina
¤Î½ç¤Ç¤¹¡£
Mandala will be out of town, Monday to Wenesday.
| mandala | 2008/02/18 12:10 AM |
#10
wake up, my friend
you were in a deep dream
(d.horse)
#11
for the Pluto
the last space shuttle's
already taken off
(tina)
for #12
pomegranate sweet
in the moonlight
wings folded
where angels fear to tread
mission to collect
the cosmo-cleaner D
emergency, Houston
Santa Claus's passing
| anne | 2008/02/17 10:06 PM |
OK, I agree to your suggestion, Sir Mandala.
Thank you.
#8
do you know that Mrs. Smith
¡¡who plays the shamisen ?
(tina)
#9
¡¡at the great gate
¡¡thus wooed the girl
¡¡Zarathustra
(mandala)
#10
wake up, my friend
you were in a deep dream
(d.horse)
for#10
for the Pluto
the last space shuttle's
already taken off
the plane
crash landed
in drunken forest
suburban train
so much crowded with
drunken men and women
in a pot
chopped duck'n onion
simmering
| tina | 2008/02/16 9:13 PM |
I made an association of somewhere else, say in UK. But it doesnt matter.
| d.horse | 2008/02/14 11:08 PM |
Well, honestly I've meant Yoshiwara Omon ¡ÊµÈ¸¶ÂçÌç¡Ë.
| mandala | 2008/02/14 10:50 PM |
This is just an aside, if the Great Gate would have meant the South Great Gate in Seoul, it was reportedly burnt down by an arson few days ago. What a coincidence!
| d.horse | 2008/02/14 1:53 PM |
Dear d.horse,
Thanks for a quick response and a kind comment.
This is ¡Æthat¡Ç which, put before a name, indicates a person or thing assumed to be known. It implies dislike, and sometimes admiration, e.g., I hate that Andrew Jones/Ah, in that England of yours, women marry for wealth.
| mandala | 2008/02/08 8:35 PM |
8)do you know Mrs. Smith
¡¡who plays the shamisen ?
(tina)
(Should "that" be omitted? or intended "that"?)
# 9)
¡¡at the great gate
¡¡thus wooed the girl
¡¡Zarathustra
(mandala)
for #10
wake up, my friend
you were in a deep dream
(d.horse)
her grandpa, she said
was a Persian merchant
(d.horse)
I first saw her trekking
the summer Alpine track
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2008/02/08 5:57 PM |
8.
¡¡do you know that
¡¡Mrs. Smith plays the shamisen ?
(tina)
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¡¡do you know that Mrs. Smith
¡¡who plays the shamisen ?
(tina)
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# 9)
¡¡in the depth of
¡¡the harem you feel
¡¡arabesque
¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡(mandala)
¡¡a minstrel narrates
¡¡the juvenile love
¡¡of a princess
¡¡at the great gate
¡¡thus wooed the girl
¡¡Zarathustra
| mandala | 2008/02/08 11:52 AM |
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9. mandala
10. d.horse
11. tina
12. anne
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| mandala | 2008/02/07 3:31 PM |
7)
daffodils in a row
noddinng each other
like feshmen at college (*freshmen?)
for #8
do you know that
Mrs. Smith plays the shamisen ?
which do you want to hear first
good news or bad news ?
I used to ride
Chagall's horse
last night I ate
a dazen gyozas
¤è¤í¤·¤¯¡£
| tina | 2008/02/07 1:27 AM |
6) crowd jostle for home
¡¡ the spring festival
I think this one is most suitable for the front page ( I mean OMOTE).
for 7)
daffodils in a row
noddinng each other
¡¡ like feshmen at college
captain, red-haired
and also hollander
strides along the track
first butterfly in the season,
if it's white, tells you
your fortune
¤è¤í¤·¤¯¡£anne
| anne | 2008/02/05 8:16 PM |
¡¡Noise of garbage trucks
¡¡hubbub at a newsstand
¡¡moon hangs hazily
¡¡(d.horse)
ÉÕ
¡¡seven are shot dead
¡¡on St Valentine¡Çs Day
¡¡(mandala)
¡¡crowd jostle for home
¡¡the spring festival
¡¡Easter eggs are safe
¡¡from bird flu virus
| mandala | 2008/02/03 1:42 PM |
Dear D.horse, I hope you¡Çre having a nice weekend. This is a charming narrative of urban scene, but a little polysyllabic. So let me trim some.
Noise of garbage trucks
hubbub at a newsstand
moon hangs hazily
(d.horse)
| mandala | 2008/02/02 10:39 PM |
4)
¡¡tiger beer?
a big smile at the bar
(Anne)
for 5)
Noise of garbage trucks
a newsstand man busy for opening
morning moon still hangs in haze
(d.horse)
Dear Mr. Master
I submit just one for now. I'm going out over the weekend. If it doesnt fit, please modify or just pass me. Thank you, ... d.horse
| d.horse | 2008/02/02 11:08 AM |
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| mandala | 2008/02/01 7:31 PM |
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| mandala | 2008/02/01 6:50 PM |
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a shabby cat
strayed into
a rainy alley
¡¡¡¡¡¡tiger beer?
a big smile at the bar
town or country
wherever you live
seats booked
for the tea party
chewing gum is
strictly prohibited
¤è¤í¤·¤¯¡£anne
| anne | 2008/02/01 5:59 PM |
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| anne | 2008/02/01 11:36 AM |
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a shabby cat
strayed into
a rainy alley
untill you mentioned
I've never heard of him
at all
over a cup of chowder
we discussed about
our broken refrigerator
a quick lunch
fritter or burger
soup or salad
(written by tina)
| tina | 2008/02/01 1:09 AM |
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it also tolls for
the old man and the sea
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| mandala | 2008/01/30 11:50 AM |
It tolls
for the old man
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2008/01/30 9:17 AM |