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This has been a great kick--great image surfing.
(Boy on a dolphin)
| mandala | 2007/02/20 6:56 PM |
for the closing
Dolphins are jumping around us
Claiming the ocean is theirs
(w.boar)
| w.boar | 2007/02/19 4:00 PM |
d.horse殿
ありがとさん。なおしました。
35.
The mayflower drifts
To the discovered land
The moon is rising
(mandala)
| mandala | 2007/02/18 10:10 PM |
mandala殿
renngaworldの清澄臨川寺が本文では川臨寺になってます。
| d.horse | 2007/02/17 7:17 PM |
Sorry the trial for No.34 was mistyped
Soon tadpoles'll cover the water
As young leaves cover the field
(d.horse)
| | 2007/02/17 7:05 PM |
for No.34
Soon tadpoles'll cover water
As young leaves cover the field
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2007/02/17 1:50 PM |
33.
A sound from a pond
Before an ancient castle
In a bare mountain
(mandala)
| mandala | 2007/02/17 12:45 AM |
for No.32
The Haunting
is the movie I never forget
(w.boar)
| w.boar | 2007/02/16 11:09 AM |
30.
Though happy with the sundown
The sun also rises soon
(mandala)
31.
Oh it has been years
Since I stopped dreaming a dream
A knock on the door
(mandala)
| mandala | 2007/02/16 10:33 AM |
for No.29
Urban crows hurrying home
To the nests in the woods
A break from work for the day
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2007/02/13 11:29 AM |
No.27,
sky was carelessly repeated as in No.26,
Please replace it with
Blue sea of Hawaii trembles
i.o.Blue skies of Hawaii smile
| Hawaiian song maker | 2007/02/08 10:55 PM |
28.
You’ve just come out of ripples
Alohaino to you
(mandala)
Notes: alohaino=a Hawaiian interjection, expressing great love.
| mandala | 2007/02/08 10:40 PM |
for No.27
Clouds won't hide the sun
Blue skies of Hawaii smile
On this wedding day
(Hawaiian song maker)
| Hawaiian song maker | 2007/02/08 6:07 PM |
26.
With the temple bell tolling
The sky is brightening up
(mandala)
| mandala | 2007/02/08 2:21 PM |
for No.25
A hairless man in working clothes
Stood beside a bonfire
Chilly morning in dead silence
(w.boar)
| w.boar | 2007/02/05 2:31 PM |
24.
Astride the broomsticks they fly
Over boughs to the pale moon
(mandala)
| mandala | 2007/02/03 10:26 PM |
a trial for No.23 but no good
A horde of elderly ladies
All wearing black backpacks
Looking up at red leaves
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2007/02/03 12:35 PM |
22.
A glass of wine in your hand
An autumn song on your lips
(mandala)
| mandala | 2007/02/01 9:05 AM |
for No.21
No word of consolation
Nor a dose of medicine
Can cure my broken heart
(w.boar)
| w.boar | 2007/01/30 11:55 AM |
Pls correct No.19 to
TV is showing
Crowds in Kairakuen garden,
My wife and I sip hot chocolate
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2007/01/28 2:46 PM |
for No.19
TV is showing
Crowds in Kairakuen,
My wife and me sip hot chocolate
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2007/01/27 1:31 PM |
for No.18
Look, my son just began toddling
Spring is around the corner
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2007/01/23 11:03 AM |
Dear D. horse,
Please take two stanzas, No.18 & 19.
| mandala | 2007/01/22 9:35 PM |
16.
O where has my gravestone gone?
A Chiristmas rose on the mound
(brothers four)
17.
Day is breaking with
A flash of hope through darkness
On a bald mountain
(mandala)
| | 2007/01/22 9:28 PM |
for No.16
Where have all
The graveyards gone?
(Brothers four)
...Gone to flowers everyone!
| d.horse | 2007/01/22 3:09 PM |
correction of No.14
Repeated "home" was no good. Pls change to "my folks" in Kansas
Thank you
| w.boar | 2007/01/22 1:57 PM |
15.
Follies still march on
Thirty years since Vietnam
Three years in Iraq
(mandala)
| mandala | 2007/01/19 10:40 PM |
for No.14
Thinking of home in Kansas
I'm on night patrol duty
(w.boar)
| w.boar | 2007/01/19 11:25 AM |
13.
For the Easter table
Farmers are hurrying home
Bathed in moonlight.
(mandala)
| mandala | 2007/01/18 11:51 PM |
for No.11 if it fits
Tomorrow I shall plow the ground
to sow the seeds of hope
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2007/01/17 4:18 PM |
11.
Step aside my lord
When the spring sun embraces
Me and the barrel
(mandala)
| mandala | 2007/01/15 8:41 PM |
for No.10
Sober up my friend
You are dreaming a daydream
(w.boar)
| w.boar | 2007/01/13 12:09 PM |
9.
Here I find your legs
Fair and slender without shoes
O there your wasp waist
(mandala)
| | 2007/01/13 12:02 AM |
No.8 revised
Where has the pretty face gone
Who used to play hide and seek
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2007/01/12 4:04 PM |
for No.8
I still remembers the old days
we used to play hide and seek
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2007/01/12 12:10 AM |
Dogs wake up sheep
Women make up kitchen fire
The moon about to fade in the sky
(d.horse)
6.
as a short day is breaking
spouting whales are to be seen
(mandala)
7.
In a vast cornfield
The cobs and leaves tremble
In the autumn wind
(mandala)
| mandala | 2007/01/11 8:55 PM |
for No.5
Dogs wake up sheep
Women make up kitchen fire
The moon about to fade in the sky
(d.horse)
| d.horse | 2007/01/10 1:09 PM |
Onto chilly streets
A subway exit spits out
Pale officegoers endlessly
.
A tropical shower hits
The hot roof of a mosque
(mandala)
| mandala | 2007/01/09 2:24 PM |